We combined our two classes to review each of our thrillers by watching everyones in the class and reviewing each others. Whilst observing everyone's opening title sequences, we wrote feedback to theirs. This is the feedback we received from the students in our class..
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| Example 1 of feedback sheet |
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two men being held hostage, one kills another".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Very skin crawling, makes me feel sick".
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"Make the murder slightly more realistic".
James Purdy
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"They got kidnapped and they are fighting for survival."
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"How it isn't very obvious but it cuts and we find out what the call was about."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"if could be."
Poppy Hopson
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two people locked away".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"The phone creates suspense".
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"Clearer plot line."
Rosie Lumbard
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two men who don't like each other tied up and in the same room together, both needing to get out."
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"The lighting worked really."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"We should've been given more info as to why this situation occurred."
Anna Martyuyuk
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"The plot is about why they thought they were locked in that room. And that phone call was someone who gave them instructions."
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"It's quite tense and I like that it cuts when he picks up the phone."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"The setting, especially the wall is not really convincing, and the fight scene as well (Not convincing)".
Saska Kirina
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Plot film is about a serial killer, who kidnaps two men and makes them fight, who stays alive".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Make-up, clothes, sound"
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"ending."
Danel
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"-The story how the guys ended there, flashback".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Phone ringing made the audience being interested in who is calling".
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"The person, who picked up the phone would be better to say something".
No name given".
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"two men are captured in some saw-esque torture game",
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"I think the shots are very well cut together and creating an excellent scening of tension".
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"Music to add more tension."
Katie H.
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two men get kidnapped, and they have to fight to death in order to get out.- Will follow story of the people who are in the room."
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Good suspense as we don't know how either of them got there or who was on the phone./The set was really realistic."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"A bit more fighting, wouldn't die that easily/ The idea of that being to end wasn't clear."
Agata Shwajcouska
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| Example 2 of feedback sheet |
"People fighting for their life, having to kill others to survive".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Mystery and tension is built, I like how no dialogue was there."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"The blood on the feet look unrealistic."
Ksenia
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"The plot may be about these two killers. So, the story can tell us about what happened before this".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Phone ringing- the fact that we don't know who was calling."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"I don't really like the background which was chosen. Looks not real."
Angel Sandelson
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two people get kidnapped and try to escape".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Costume & makeup."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"More realistic fighting."
Victor Treptow
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Two men are tied up and have a fight to the death to grab the phone".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Great editing- feels fluid/ phone ringing adds intensity ."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"Longer fight."
Ollie Tennant
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Non- linear, goes back to who is on the other end of the phone".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"The set."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
left blank.
Georgia McKnight
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"Non linear- How do they get there?".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Setting, character proxemics."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"More realistic fighting."
Tyler Byrne
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"About the escape of the man who got out of the situation".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"-The use of makeup/-The set is realistic."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"More realistic fighting."
Alexander Goh
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"The killer is going through a bunch of challenges to get his family back".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"The lighting used was very realistic/ The use of make-up i.e blood."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"More realistic fighting."
Crerer Antony
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"People have been taken as prisoners/ are wanted for something perhaps information ".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"The vivid realism of the room they're in. + the uncomfortable blood shots/feet etc."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"The fighting was awkward + slightly unrealistic."
Bertie Clarke
What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
"The search for who killed Adam".
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
"Make up, acting."
How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
"Fighting."
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