Audience Feedback for the first stage of the Digipack

I asked my teacher and peers for feedback on what I had created so far on the digipack. Above is the feedback they gave me which I have recorded. I will use this feedback and my research when editing the digipack further. The best bit of feedback explained that the image looked to much like a cameraphone picture with a block of text inserted on the top, which is effectively what it is so far. However, I will work hard to make sure the picture is well edited, by adding some more grain, and make sure the text matches the images that are on the digipack.